Dear Toreg,
I am so happy I traded my sunstone for your spear-thrower because I know it’s going to help my clan by far. When I was on the way home I met Kenok and we settled our relationship and became very good friends. When I finally reached home ,I saw Mora with her huge smile and her watering eyes. Mora is recovering from her illness, and we talked and talked for hours about Seelan as well as the spear thrower it is a very important part of my life.
Seeing Mora’s face when I told her about Seelan was just joy filling up in my heart. We talked so much about you and my trip that my mouth started to hurt. She was so happy and amazed when I told her that her beloved brother was still alive. She showed a bit of sadness too because she really wanted to see Seelan. I told her that Seelan had no legs and she giggled a bit but then she felt broken hearted for him because he now can’t explore the world. Her face turned bright red when I told her that I had something for her. I pulled out the bracelet that Seelan made her and as soon as she saw it she started to cry – she thought this was the most loveliest gift that Seelan had ever made her.
Since my return, my relationship with Kenok has completely changed. The day I came back from my trip I met Kenok and I sat on my favorite boulder and started to talk to him. We talked about how the spirit animal was not a spirit. It was actually called a dagger- tooth tiger and your clan had seen it centuries ago it was the animal that killed your dad Kenok said. Kenok and I have definitely become closer to each other and now I know that he will always be there for me. I’m really glad that we had this conversation because from now on he won’t boss me and be rude to me. After a while he started to sob and so did I. We also talked about the spear-thrower. He thought it was beautiful and because I have carving skills he suggested that I should make one for him. It would also be really splendid for hunting and right when I saw it I knew that it was beautiful and handy .
My clan wanted me to show them how to throw a spear. I told them that I would hit s distant tree and they thought it was impossible. I threw it and it hit smack in the middle of the trunk. I looked at them and all of there mouths where wide open. They knew that this was the thing that would move hunting to a different level. After that they all jumped with joy and they all had a huge smile on there faces. I told them all that I would start making spear-throwers and that it was going to be beneficial to us. Mora came up and gave me the warmest hug I have ever received.
All in all, everything is going well. I planted the healing plant closer to our clan, which made everyone a lot happier because know if someone got hurt we could just run to the river bake and take some medicine from the plant. I even used the spear-thrower in action and it was amazing I hit the oxen right in the heart . Oh ya, I want to say thank you again because if everything I told you on this letter wouldn’t exist trade didn’t happen then this wouldn’t even have happened.
Love,
Dar
Ps I might come back.
Reflection
Organization: most of my paragraps hade a intro a middle and a end
Ideas: most of my paragraps fully support my main idea
Word Choice: I had a lot of amazing words that make the story more interesting
Sentence Fluency: my sentence fluency was really good but i had 1 or 2 run-ons
Convections: I need to work on my punctuation and my grammer because i am not so good at spelling
Writing process: i did all the steps rih and i didnt miss anything
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