Dear Toreg,
I have reached my clan safely and I hope your clan is all right. First and foremost, I would like to thank you for trading with me and teaching me how to use the spear-thrower. It has benefited my clan enormously. Has the sunstone helped you? Mora had a huge shock when I told her that Seelan was alive. I also met Kenok in the forest, and we had a discussion about my dad. Now our relationship has improved a lot.
When I demonstrated the spear thrower in action, the hunters of my clan were shocked speechless. Then, the cheering began. Only the youngest of the hunters did not understand the significance of this new tool. It has helped us in so many ways. We now sustain fewer injuries when hunting the massive wooly mammoths and bulky bison; we also have much faster and cleaner hunts. Now I doubt that food will be much of a problem anymore. Our storage pit is now quite full, with extra food to last. I am glad that we traded and I hope the sunstone has helped you as well.
On the journey back, I was surprised to meet Kenok in the forest. At first, we were ready to strangle each other, but as soon as we started talking about Father, we calmed down. I now realize that Kenok had been caring for me, even if he was a bit harsh. He has also realized that you do not need to hunt or gather to make a living, and there are some things that you can do that may seem insignificant, yet can earn you an honored place in a community. I explained to him the dagger-tooth cat, but he did not believe me at first. The next morning, there was a dagger-tooth cat sunning itself on the rocks nearby! Now Kenok is eased, knowing that it was not his fault that Father died. We are now partners in hunt, and close confiders in each other.
Mora’s face was a myriad of expressions when I told her that her brother Seelan was still alive. There were so many expressions together; shocked, relieved, stunned, surprised, ecstatic, and thankful. She was shocked and ecstatic, because she expected her brother to be dead; relieved, because it was not so; stunned and surprised, because the other clan helped him so much; and last but not least, thankful for the other clan, his wellbeing, and for the beautiful bracelet Seelan made her. She is now no longer sick, and has a lively spring in her step I have never seen before.
All in all, everything is going very well. We have enough food to last for many ages, and a tight group of hunters. I join them every night at the campfire sharing stories. My relationships in the clan have improved, and I now walk with more confidence. Mora is extremely glad that I brought the healing plant back to camp, and a bit is disappointed that she had not thought of growing the plant herself before. We have been having a prosperous time here, and I hope your clan is too.
Sincerely,
Dar
My Reflection:
In my Dar Essay I used my imagination to my fullest extent, trying my hardest to picture Mora, Kenok, and the hunters. I think that all in all I did very well, with few, if not none, mistakes. My sentence fluency was very good, I think because I read so many books. Most of my word choice comes from books too. I think that the main reason why my conventions are correct was that it was drummed into me from a young age to always do things properly, be it quick fast scrawl, e-mail, or important college document. I’m really not sure of what to reflect on, so I’ll leave it there. Bye!